So I’ve decided to try my hand at more poetry, this time with the help of TwinDaddy over at STUPHBLOG.
Please, let me know what you think. I’m nervous on this one…
An Angel Became a Devil
Today an angel became a devil
His halo inverted
His sparkling morality
Completely perverted
He reached out to me
Held me with his stare
Wrapped me in his words
Believing he was rare
His skin turned to ash
His voice was grating
His eyes pitch black
His lies were baiting
His touch, once so sweet
Began to maim
Trailing his finger against my skin
Left a line of scars and shame
Where he touched
Pain erupted
Slowly but surely
I was being corrupted
Where did the love go
From what started with a simple kiss
He drove the knife in
And with a grin, gave it a twist
My Rabbit Hole Trips 
Well, obviously I like it.
You best…. You wrote half.
You wrote one more line than I did.. 😉
So? I can’t help it that it’s been in my head all day… I do have other ones floating around in there too.
Well, c’mon! Let’s write some more!
Ok… Give me a bit.. As I don’t think you want the lyrics to disco inferno
Um…no.
Well a discussion about batman led to the sun to a burning ball to disco inferno… Only a fraction took place in my head.
I’m lost.
One of my superiors thinks like I do! We’ve decided he is the joker, I am Harley Quinn, our boss is the commissioner, the 2 guys moving here are batman and robin, and another guy is Alfred. We’re debating on the other 2.
Oh dear.
I know! It’s awesome.
lol
See! You know it’s the truth
Nope!
Lies you heathen!
I would never.
Too late!
I think it’s great. Well done!
Thanks. 🙂 I had a line in my head all day and had to do something with it!
LIKE, very much!
Aw thanks hun! Very much. I’m not great at poetry but giving it a try.
Normally I switch off when I see the word poetry, but I liked this. I think mainly because it made sense 🙂
Aw! Thanks lovie. 🙂
Alice, Twindaddy, great work I would certainly read more from the two of you.
Don’t worry. I have more random in my head.
It’s fantastic! Great job! 😀
Thank you!
Nailed it.
Plus I love you both. = WINNING.
Aw thanks lovie!
❤
Reblogged this on hansolosvagina and commented:
Loved this
Very good this. Plus I love the Phantom of the Opera based image too. It works well with the words.
Trying to get the repetitive emotions from my past coming out. That just keep coming and coming and coming. It’s like I’m drowning in them.
I wish I could throw you a life-line. Just keep writing, and we’ll keep reading and taking the words away for you. Xx
Aw. Thanks hun 🙂
I THINK THE COMMENTS ARE FUNNY AND THE POEM WAS VERY GOOD.